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The only real thing I can see that could be improved is the lineart and colouring technique. The lineart is, as you've said, shaky. To fix this you could make faster strokes, which tends to give less time for your hand to wiggle. Another tip I've found is to take the lining in small batches or sections, and to not rush it at all. As for the colouring, the edges of the markings and such are very sharp edged. If you were to smudge or these hard edges a touch it would improve the look of the piece, I would think.
But as always your anatomy is pretty much as spot on as realism gets, and I absolutely adore the shading. A commison I would be proud to be the commisioner of!
Oh, and if you're looking for some inspiration for either your drawings or the AMV... I suggest you check out the webcomic OFF-WHITE and the first episode of the fanmade animated OFF-WHITE series. :3
I've tried it dude, I've tried. My lines are still shaky.. ;_; I just need more practice.. MOAR PRACTICE. MOOOAARRR.
Pfft, I threw anatomy off a 100 000 000 000 000 000 000m high cliff for this piece. It just doesn't work...
OHGOODNESS OFF-WHITE IS AMAZING I HAVEN'T READ THAT FOR AGES
Practice. Um.
YEAH YOU HAVE FUN WITH THAT...
I'm still trying to make my lining program's pressure sensitivity work right. >:U
WELL IT'S BETTER THAN MY ANATOMY.
SO STOP COMPLAINING ABOUT YOURSELF.
YES, YES IT IS. SO FABULOUS. GO READ IT, DAMMIT. ALSO WATCH THIS: [link]
Ooohh, animation....
DEAL WITH IT.
It is the most fabulous animation I have ever seen, plus it's realistic so it can inspire you. Yay!
My stupid bloody cat is throwing a tantrum and tossing her dishes everywhere and SPILLED HE ENTIRE FREAKING WATER DISH
HELP ME SCOLD HER
FUUUUUU
HAKU
STOP IT OR I'LL GO ELECTRIC FORM ALL UP AND DOWN YOUR FACE.
IT WORKED.
OUR POWERS COMBINED WORK.
BUAHAHAHAHAHAH RULE THE WORLD