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Feya-san Commission-Feya and Wolven by FenneAdaekhol Feya-san Commission-Feya and Wolven by FenneAdaekhol
This took longer than it should have... I've been quite distracted lately...

I'm pretty happy with it, but the faces bother me slightly... And the lines are shaky like usual... and shading i crap...

I'm sorry, :iconfeya-san: D':

Commission 1 is finished~

Onto the second one... Well, I have to get the sketch onto my computer first, which means I have to get my printer/scanner fixed... So sadly it might take a little while 3: Sorryy!

Characters (c) :iconfeya-san:
Art (c) :iconjinglez-luffles-yall:
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Kaykao Featured By Owner Nov 27, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
What I noticed first when I saw this piece was the expressions on the character's faces. Though a more realistic style like your own doesn't allow for facial expressions as obvious as in cartoon, You captured the moment wonderfully. Both just seem to be enjoying a quiet moment of bliss in each other's prescence, and at this moment, wish for nothing more.

The only real thing I can see that could be improved is the lineart and colouring technique. The lineart is, as you've said, shaky. To fix this you could make faster strokes, which tends to give less time for your hand to wiggle. Another tip I've found is to take the lining in small batches or sections, and to not rush it at all. As for the colouring, the edges of the markings and such are very sharp edged. If you were to smudge or these hard edges a touch it would improve the look of the piece, I would think.

But as always your anatomy is pretty much as spot on as realism gets, and I absolutely adore the shading. A commison I would be proud to be the commisioner of!

Oh, and if you're looking for some inspiration for either your drawings or the AMV... I suggest you check out the webcomic OFF-WHITE and the first episode of the fanmade animated OFF-WHITE series. :3
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FenneAdaekhol Featured By Owner Dec 2, 2012  Student General Artist
I could have done so much better with them faces. Now that this is completed i have so many more die as I could have used to make it better... :facepalm: But I was in a bit of a rush, I admit. The second commission should be better once I figure out how to get it onto a computer... CURSE YOU DEAD SCANNER!!!

I've tried it dude, I've tried. My lines are still shaky.. ;_; I just need more practice.. MOAR PRACTICE. MOOOAARRR.


Pfft, I threw anatomy off a 100 000 000 000 000 000 000m high cliff for this piece. It just doesn't work...

OHGOODNESS OFF-WHITE IS AMAZING I HAVEN'T READ THAT FOR AGES
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Kaykao Featured By Owner Dec 2, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
OHSHUSHYOU. ITLOOKSFIIIINNNNE.

Practice. Um.
YEAH YOU HAVE FUN WITH THAT...
I'm still trying to make my lining program's pressure sensitivity work right. >:U

WELL IT'S BETTER THAN MY ANATOMY.
SO STOP COMPLAINING ABOUT YOURSELF.
YES, YES IT IS. SO FABULOUS. GO READ IT, DAMMIT. ALSO WATCH THIS: [link]
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FenneAdaekhol Featured By Owner Dec 2, 2012  Student General Artist
BUTBUTBUTBUT

Ooohh, animation....
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Kaykao Featured By Owner Dec 2, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
NO, NO ALLIF. NO BUTS. YOU ARE FABULOUS.
DEAL WITH IT.

It is the most fabulous animation I have ever seen, plus it's realistic so it can inspire you. Yay!
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FenneAdaekhol Featured By Owner Dec 2, 2012  Student General Artist
FUUU

My stupid bloody cat is throwing a tantrum and tossing her dishes everywhere and SPILLED HE ENTIRE FREAKING WATER DISH

HELP ME SCOLD HER

FUUUUUU
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Kaykao Featured By Owner Dec 2, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
HAKU.
HAKU

STOP IT OR I'LL GO ELECTRIC FORM ALL UP AND DOWN YOUR FACE.
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FenneAdaekhol Featured By Owner Dec 2, 2012  Student General Artist
I threw her(literally) out of my room.

IT WORKED.

OUR POWERS COMBINED WORK.

BUAHAHAHAHAHAH RULE THE WORLD
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Feya-san Featured By Owner Nov 25, 2012  Hobbyist
Wow this is beautiful!!! Thank you so much
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FenneAdaekhol Featured By Owner Nov 25, 2012  Student General Artist
No problem! I'm glad you like it ^^
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